CommentsDevious CommentsWhile I agree with some of your points, I actually didn't do the coloring on this one. I didn't suggest any light sources on the line art at all (though I probably should have). But I'll mark it fair anyway, perhaps ~Chizel-Man will take a look.
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One thing I noticed is you seem to have a few erroneous light sources. Not quite sure where the light reflections at the front are coming from considering how dark the rest of her front is, especially as the reflections on the side facing the main light source are so dim. I think you could have afforded to make the shadows and reflections from the main light source a bit more drastic and the dimmer colours to define the curves at the front.
Anyways i hope i helped and/or made sense
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